Thursday, March 19, 2009

The echo of my heart

With the shattered dreams, and broken wings,
here i am, standing in the dark, where the shadow springs,
high above me, there's a dark cloud flying,
screaming for forgiveness,felt like crying,

what to decide, and what to live for,
yet again, got the pain, waiting for more,
through the ashes of time, looked in the eyes of fate,
made me strong, made me fight the shadows of hate,

closed my eyes, heard the echo of my heart,
compelling for the survival, and asking for a start,
the journey of my dreams awaits me,
and the road to success, that i cant see,

hope springs where happiness dies,
keeps us alive, and defeats the lies,
let me step up to the borders of sadness,
let me bring back to you the same old kindness,

a shimmer of hope that i want to follow,
that could help me stay away from all the sorrow,
let us put our hands together,
and pray, that we bloom and shine forever!

16 comments:

siras said...

closed my eyes, heard the echo of my heart,
compelling for the survival, and asking for a start,

Beautiful lines! =)

AJ said...

:) .. Though this poem is a little old. But this is what I am going through these days. Hence the relevancy of the post. hehe.

Anonymous said...

(y) keep up!

Anonymous said...

there is so much honesty in the way you write.
wow... it sure is transparent :)

Anushay. said...

I love the opening stanza!

and this one too

hope springs where happiness dies,
keeps us alive, and defeats the lies,

AJ said...

@sickscorpion: Sure will.

@americanising desi: Thanks.

@anushay: Welcome. To me bloggy.

Ubaid said...

hope springs where happiness dies,
keeps us alive, and defeats the lies

oh papaaayy kamal ker dia !!

siras said...

You've been awarded the Lemonade Blog Award :)

gone! said...

Amazing (:
You are such an inspirational and optimistic poet.

AJ said...

Thanks people. I hope these words can make someone's day.

Ubaid said...

U got an award... check out my blog

Z Sattar said...

Excellent work dude....from the start till the end you have filled the poem with every emotion. It has pain, it has hope and it has life....

Good One/..

AJ said...

@zeeshan: thank you and welcome :)

Some kind of courage. said...

this left me speechless,
almost like you just took the words right out of my mouth.

love this :)

Some kind of courage. said...

this is beautiful.

AJ said...

@Naive15yearold: Welcome to the blog, glad you like it :)

 
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