One night I asked myself to talk,
To talk to me, and let the fears walk,
Still, I m lying awake in my bed,
Swinging in my dreams, being blue and red,
Whether its autumn or spring, don’t care,
It’s a world of challenges, and yes I m here to dare,
I would fly, fly high even without my wings,
To the gardens of truth, where faith springs,
Can’t let the truth become a lie,
Want to go higher, where the dreams fly,
Need a vision; a trail of stars to follow,
Got to find bliss, and keep away the sorrow,
Beneath those shiny stars, without whom the night is nothing,
I sat on the mountain of dreams, thought of something,
About that something, that was mine long ago,
Would have those desires back, that’s what I know,
Trust, truth and care that’s what I can’t give away,
Lost some dreams, so let's just pray,
I feel like flying, without being sway,
So can’t let my faith in me drift away.
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Trust, truth and care that’s what I can’t give away,
Lost some dreams, so let's just pray
kamal ker dia !!
Can’t let the truth become a lie,
Want to go higher, where the dreams fly,
Need a vision; a trail of stars to follow,
Got to find bliss, and keep away the sorrow,This is such a feel good stanza! Makes me feel motivated! You write awesomely well. :)
I am seriously speechless. You have an awesome talent when it comes to writing and expressing your thoughts. In fact, I am a fan! Each stanza tells a story and Im sure they way you've written anyone can relate to it...Anyway its a very well written piece and sure brings hope for the future. =)
@ubaid: Thanks. :)
@siras: really? glad, it made someone feel motivated. that's the intention.
@brok3n: Whoa!! Thanks :) All that matters is the present. and i have a fan. :D that is motivating :D
You don't have "a" fan. I bet there are many fans including me of your optimistic writings. I could relate to every word of it. Very meaningful :)
@komal: oki. Thank you :)
i always detest people who can do poetry and count yourself in that :P
i am so not likin it that you are doing good with it!
i love your words and the flow and the message.
thanks for bringing me on here :)
@sickscorpion: Thanks mate.
@seher: haha. thanks.:)
That's something which is really beautifully composed.. It's worth reading.. Never give up going with flow of thoughts!:)
@spotlesssoul: Glad you like it, and welcome to the blog.
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